GingerbreadMan wrote:
本人是专做IT领域英译中的自由翻译。目前国内市场做得还不错。但一直想有所突破，做一做国际客户。
在PROZ上也经常看到相关招聘帖子。但发过简历去，没人理，请大家帮我看看，是不是我的简历有硬伤，还是其他什么问题？
以下是简历：
Hi,
I'm a freelancer translator in China.
I hold a bachelor degree of Computer Science.
I'm good at English - Simplified Chinese translation of IT related fields.
I saw your post on proZ.com(
http://www.proz.com/translation-jobs/12345).
I have been working as a translator for more than 3 years, and I have provided translation service for several world-famous IT companies, including CompanyA, CompanyB, CompanyD and CompanyD.
I sincerely hope we can cooperate in the near future.
My details are as follows:
Full Name:ZhangSan
Email:
[email protected]
Source Language:English
Target Language:Chinese(simplified)
Fields of expertise:Software
MSN ID:
[email protected]
Price per word:$0.1
Daily Capacity:4000 English Words
Some of Project Experience:
Project Name Wordcount
PorjectA 500,000
PorjectB 50,000
PorjectC 30,000
PorjectD 80,000
The attachment is my Registration Form.
Couple of things to note:
1. Even if you have to start with "hi", at least try to show the fact that you know who you might be speaking with. The best thing to do is obviously start with "To whom it may concern". Dear colleague is ok; so long as you don't say "dear,", that's all good. My rule of thumb is immediately delete all emails that start with "Dear, (body of email)".
2. "I'm good at English - Simplified Chinese translation of IT related fields." - frankly speaking, you'd be better darn good at this - from a recruiter's POV, why bother applying if you are not good at it, right? This is sort of redundant.
3. Sequence. I'd recommend starting with "I saw your post..." then move into introducing yourself. You can say, "im a ....based in China", but not IN China.
4. If you are responding to a specific job posting, you should highlight (briefly) why you'd be a good fit for the position. Avoid "looking forward to future collaboration" - you want to collaborate with them on this very task so you'll most definitely want your email to highlight this point.
Just some thoughts of mine. Good luck!
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